by bluedragonauthor
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Anyone else get any Hateful-Eight-Samuel-Jackson-scene flashbacks? You know the scene.
Amazing. I hope the next chapter doesn't skip time and it actually begins with the morning after. I want to see the girls have THAT conversation!
I'm still in love with Annabelle. If she ever progresses into a full blown bisexual, she would be my fantasy come true. My own bisexual wife enjoyed watching me when I screwed her girlfriend in front of her. She would offer words of encouragement while I did it, but not with the enthusiasm that Belle has exhibited in past chapters.
If Matthew doesn't end up married to her at the end of all this, I'll be heartbroken.
I am so afraid that there are going to be a number of broken hearts in the BTC.
Damn, BD. What a helluva couple of chapters!
You write so well that these people are real, not characters. And we as readers get to be flies on the wall to observe this incredible grouping of intense, real people, living their unique and special lives.
You are a master storyteller, BD. Please never stop!
I'm confused. On page 5 of this part, you wrote "While Mari had told me the Monday morning after she'd given me her virginity that she regretted telling me so many secrets about the girls' true feelings for me", but at the end of the previous part, Mari said she wasn't a virgin. Which is it, and why wasn't anything mentioned about that in this part?
@anonymous asking about Mari's virginity:
It's explained in Ch. 27-28. Without spoiling too much, she was only *technically* not a virgin. So I think Matt just internally refers to it as "taking her virginity" because that's how he thinks of it. Or it was an oversight. Either interpretation works.
I have to agree with ScottishTexan...I love Annabelle and her relationship with Matt. The idea of them being the anchor-point for BTC is most appealing...the idea of the BTC splitting up is HEARTRENDING..
Niave is also a very nice counterpoint to all this...and SHE loves Matt with all her heart...AND she has given her anal virginity...!!
All the girls are in love with Matt...Sam IS gonna be a problem, maybe...unless she controls her jealousy...and Matt cares for her just as much. As he cares for ALL the girls...as in any "harem" story, each girl is an individual, yet an integral part of the whole, bringing something different to the table.
Alice...I feel WILL be back, and more-than-willing to participate fully...bringing more completion to the group, as before...AND SHE REALLY DOES LOVE MATTIE, TOO!!
FIVE**5**STARS...AGAIN!!
Super hot, as always!
But this situation doesn't feel sustainable to me. The three-way tug of war between Naimh, Belle and Sam - and Mari kind of, so really, all the girls but Zofi - something's gotta give. I just hope there isn't too much pain before things settle into a more stable configuration.
5* again
As goofy and unbelievable as this story has been so far, it's a GREAT story because you not only keep it interesting but also by how well you tell it. Not that many people on here can do that
.. Be proud!!