All Comments on 'The Big Tits Club Ch. 49-50'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It's all getting a bit too complicated. These are teenagers, in love and in lust. There was way too much overanalysing in this part. Time to wrap things up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What can i say, awesome! I have been enjoying the depth and character development and growth throughout this series. The sexual experiences etc. Have been great to read, but the storie's unfolding direction has kept me wanting to read the next chapter, and so on... Keep up the great writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Ahh, the mess that is teenage romance!

DominicNicoleDominicNicoleover 2 years ago

As always. Completely amazing. Just post the other chapters already!

BruceWoBruceWoover 2 years ago

This is a wonderful story. It is rare to see any story that see its characters grow so much. Thanks for your excellent writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is amazing. I hope it doesn’t end any time soon. So many places you could go. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Brilliant as always cant wait to see how things play out. See you next week!

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

"and really, being obedient for you for these past few years have been my life's purpose, collectively."

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Why don't you just turn Matthew into a cuckold and be done with it already. You've totally emasculated him. How can any of these girls respect him if he's nothing more than just their bitch?

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Something else was extremely troubling to me was some of the stuff that came out from Matthew and Beverly talking. There were several times that Beverly described Samantha's motivation in such a way as to make her seem like a narcissist. Beverly herself comes off as extremely narcissistic. She's a horrible mother for putting her child, her own flesh and blood second to her career. She wanted her life as she had it planned for herself and Matthew was an obstacle.

Now she is making sure that Matthew isn't an obstacle for Samantha as well. She wants him to be a wussy. That's just as bad as a man who subjugates his wife. Bullshit. 3/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love this story. So good. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

After 50 chapters of fucking without being in a relationship, Matt and Sam decide to become Friends with benefits. Sorry, but this is dragging on a bit too long now. Finish it with a bang.

SypherzSypherzover 2 years ago
Hmm.

I think I might be in the minority here but this feels like an ending to me. I never expected this story to end with a AND THEY ALL LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER.

After what.... 46... chapter we've finally gotten something from these characters that we've never even come close to, honesty. Hell even Mama Bear had an honest talk with Matt.

I need to be clear, I'm not even coming close to saying that I want this to be the end, just that it feels like you could end it here and it would be fine. That's also not to say I totally wouldn't be happy with a continuation of the story years down the road... after college... during college that would be cool.

Hell, I'll be waiting to see what happens, be it BTC 2: The College Years, (Yes btw that does make this current story "The Wonder Years", one guy six great girls how the fuck could it not be a wonder?) or just a continuation of this current story with CH 51+ will be good.

Very good shit. Glad to see Matt and Sam finally have an honest talk.

ipreferoralipreferoralover 2 years ago

The machinations are becoming too complex for me. If emotional exposure is warranted, then you might have some of the girls leave the BTC for other guys and let Matt feel the pain, then see which remaining girl is really right for him.

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASalmost 2 years ago

I think...I continue to be surprised by how these "kids" continue maturing, in such a short period of time...again, reflects reality of life!!

Mom...still wanna see her become part of BTC...'BTC MOMMA'?? She and Matt need to get it on, soon, and turn her loose on the 6 (7) girls...she will truly atone for how she has treated Matt all this time!! And, get his big cock stretching her out as she has seen him do to so many of the girls so far...fulfilled own "spank-bank" fantasies about her BOY!!

TALLY HO!! NEXT CHAPTER COMING UP!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is not how a guy who gets laid behaves. Scottish texan hit the nail on the head. You basically make him a woman to create drama.

On top of it he "loves" Sam, who looks up to his mom. The emotionally distant psychopath. In the first half of the series there is a lot of talk of filling wombs and zofi having Matty's baby. Now he wants to settle down with Sam.

Settling down is a point of contention that doesn't even make sense, because real men would just be trying to keep the whole 6/7 chick banging rotation going for as long as possible not destroy the operation and risk getting clam from only one, because you got weird. You can't even call it greedy, because they are already banging. You're set. Job done. And she's not pushing you to stop draining your balls with the babe next door. Super great. Why fuck it up with a title for time 200.

S_a_u_t_e_u_rS_a_u_t_e_u_rover 1 year ago

Imagine drawing a straight line on paper, crumpling the paper, and magically removing all but the line. This is what the path of psychological development of these characters resembles. I mean that as a compliment.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

And just like that the odds shift again

Belle 5-1

Sam 3-1 (still the favorite for now)

Mari 6-1 popular dark horse bet

Alice 12-1 still in consideration as a post-college scenario remains in place

Neevie 18-1 all heat no intimacy

Zofi 60-1 gender fluidity baby and she wants one

Polyamory 20-1 BTC 2.0

None of the above 35-1 the whole thing blows up

Remember to get your bets in before reading final installment. No peeking, no spoilers!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

This one has been confusing, i'll admit, not sure if it was the writing or just the characters having no idea what they really wanted but it was very mixed up, sam and matty wanted to date and it was clear that only they would have that emotional intimacy that matty wouldn't have with anyone else, he kept talking how it was always sam that was there for him during the hard times and he really loved her "that way" (emotional connection way, like most true couples have) and then you kinda undid it and changed all of the connection, they were again just friends with benefits but that she was hit favorite, not sure that's progress. For me it looks more like you wanted to take a big leap and have then date for real, which would have been fair since they are perfect for each other emotionally, none of the other girls understand him the same way, but then you thought it would ruin the BTC and maybe bring the story to a quick ending and you pulled it all back, and their explaining got confusing and i'm not sure everything they said made sense, 1 minute they were saying something, then the next line was canceling whatever was just said and tried to almost "rewrite history", then back to emotional connection, then again cancelling it and only being "fuck buddies", page 5 was especially confusing and not your best work. I get your point, they weren't ready to have a real relationship like adults do, not while they were still in school with the BTC there so it wasn't a bad choice to pull it back a bit, but you almost leapt for it, and it seemed like Matty did want to be in a serious relationship with Sam and she wanted that too, whether or not they were truly ready or if it was the right time, that's a bit up for debate. Series has been really good so far, i'll admit, but this one was too indecisive for you as a writer and you're confusing the readers when the characters feelings are still so "should we, should we not" even after 50 parts and 1 year since they started the sex parts, they knew what they wanted and could have made it work.

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