by bluedragonauthor
I truly love this series and these characters. Fantastic writing although the alliteration is a bit overdone. I can’t wait to read more!!
so, this was the alliteration chapter? cute.
Matt fully confronting the absence of his other partners was the best part of this chapter. Bringing Holly back (which triggered it) and the 'story time' tie for second best.
another great chapter, thank you for sharing it.
can't wait to see more about Skyler, that could really be a game changer, an older woman as hot as Sam, watch out
To me, alliteration is BDA's calling card, his stylistic signature.
Warning, Matt, warning: stay away from the TA. That's courting a special brand of hell. Hot take: Eva is going to turn out to be a freak in bread. Hard to get, but once the walls are breached, the flood will be unleashed.
I really enjoy the overall story, but the constant alliterations are distracting from it.