by bluedragonauthor
This story is great.
The alliteration is ... beginning to detract from the story.
Yes the Alliteration must be dialed back, a sprinkle here or there is plenty.... Aside from that I am really enjoying a well written story, good characters & character development, plot and subplots.
I'm definitely looking forward to the next installments, the foreshadowing is an added pull for the reader continuing to stay invested ... well done
A damn good start on the 2.0 edition of the BTC.
Thank you for returning with some of our favorite characters and adding new ones.
So glad you are writing BTC 2.0 I've been looking forward to this for ages! Thanks