by destinie21
Developing nicely. Though it sometimes seems that the story wants to go in a slightly Dominant/submissive direction, this is not coming out to the fullest...On purpose? We'll see...
Aside from the occasional missed word or homophone, your work is fabulous.
Your story is becoming addictive. I like the danger of the situation where the characters can get caught. Can’t wait to see how it ends so I’m off to find out. Thanks for sharing.
Whenever I need a quick fix, I can always count on this series to give it to me. It keeps me from being A Bitch