by destinie21
I've really enjoyed the entire series and think you're doing a wonderful job of combining hot sex scenes with an actual plot. You've made the characters engaging and realistic, people I'd actually give a damn about :). I hope you keep writing.
this series is excellent, been waiting for ch7 for months hoping u would submit it, please, please let there be more...thanku xxxx
The problem with your stuff is that it's too addictive. I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter. And as for Courtney....hmmmm, what's that little vixen up to? No good, I'll bet.lol
Overwritten and standard boring lesbian sex. Ho hum. My advice to you is to get an editor to look over your work. It may help to make it more readable.
Iloved this new story and i cant wait for the other. I am wondering if cournety will be in the picture sexually i mean. I hopwe the next story is soon. Great job
You recieved one bad comment and I am sorry about that, you put a lot into your characters and that helps make the story, I liked this story very much and would hope there might be more to it to, at least another chapter or two to see how Madison and Cori make out as a couple, keep up the good writing.
Man i love your series! please write more soon! Madison and Corrin are hot together, it would definately be great to keep them together with so much lust!
You are one of the most skilled writers I've seen. Its also nice to have something other than "Youre hot, let's fuck" on here.
Cant wait until the next chapter!
You have developed the characters well in this series. It will be intesting to see if Madi and Cori last as a couple or if Courtney will tempt Madi away... Keep up the good work!
u got ur writting down pack and i know how hard it iz.. cant wait to read more of ur work.. thanks for sharing
i have to say that that was one of the best stories ever published on the web site. i really enjoyed it!
Yep, loved the series. Why? Because it's always great to read a well written love story. Though I have the feeling that chapter seven isn't going to be the last.
Story, characters and writer have evolved through the story. I liked the Saddam Hussein mention as it embodies that change.
It's good to see that you have evolved as well and you're treating the story more seriously, as in a better spell check, better entwined plot and a more varied approach to sex.
I've read this story like a thousand times, and can't help but love it more and more. Sorry I never commented before. It's always been one of my favorites. Hope you'll do more one day.
I've read this story so many times and every time I just seem to love it more! Hope you keep writing and I can't wait to read more of your stuff !