All Comments on 'The Bitch Ch. 08'

WOW. It Was a Long, Long Wait But Worth Every Penny. You Are So Good At Giving Life To Your Characters And I Thank You For Your Work. TomJ

great chapter. this story gets better and better everytime the next chapter can't be the last please continue. You have a greaqt story going don't end it so soon.

STOP Please or I'll cry! I love it! I love Corinn and Madison! More! More! More!

good work as usual.

...as usual! I look forward to every installment.

I can't believe there will only be one more chapter, this is one of the best stories I have found on literotica or another website.

This is the first chapter in the series that I've read and I can't tell you how much I enjoyed it. It was so easy to feel the emotion. Even as a 'first time reader' I could connect with the characters. Time to go back and get caught up on my reading.

This is the first chapter in the series that I've read and I can't tell you how much I enjoyed it. It was so easy to feel the emotion. Even as a 'first time reader' I could connect with the characters. Time to go back and get caught up on my reading.

Your writing just keeps getting better and better. The characters are so real, their expression of feelings and how they think and talk are first rate and your main character has grown through the chapters, which is very good - and the sex is definately hot!

More, more and more PLEASE i love this story! it just gets better and better!

The first time I read the story in its entirety, was after this chapter was posted, and I must confess as a regular reader on this site, this has been one of the best I have read in a while. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Please don't end this story w/ only one more chapter. You hae the mark of a truly great author, you make your characters real enough to your audience that it's a little sad when it ends. I really enjoy your writing and can't wait for the continuation of this story and Raine and Sheri.

Please please please please, keep it going as long as possible...please, please........you are a wonderful and skilled story teller.

Amen to everything already said. But...I was kinda hoping to see something happen between Corrin and Courtney. Does that make me bad?

This has so much more to offer. Don't stop now!!!!!

Dear Destinie21,

Your writing of these chapters were very good. Please keep up the great work that you are doing. Keep writing the Bitch Series. I love reading it. There has to be more as the younger girl goes off to college. Those ladies' bodies are really hot!

Thank you!

Billie!

Hi,

Be honored that you have witnessed my first comment among all of the stories I read on the site.

I adored this story, it was very hypnotic. I read all of your submissions on one sitting, and absolutely loved every one of them. Hope that you will be able to finish all of your unfinished works. Keep up the great work! ^_^

i wanted to cry wen i read this... its just so sweat.

keep up the good work

This is the best story I have ever written! Public outcry, write until these characters are 80...(well, that might be a little gross, but you get what I mean)!!!

I really love this story please continue this story I want to read more .

I have been meaning to write a comment about this for the longest. This has to be one of the absolute best stories I have ever read. Your command of the human emotion is astounding. I sincerely hope that you will continue to write this story. If not, I am anxiously awaiting to see how you end it. Please continue to write...even if it is not for the lovely "Bitch" series.

It is such an enchanting story

Plain out awesome! Shall look foward to next installment. Love the characters.

excellently written;great characters,i was completely floored while reading this story.please continue writing

This surely must be one of the best stories on Literotica. If you've not read it you are missing something special. Go and download it now!

You are by far most skilled and passionate writer I've ever come across. I love all of your work, and particularly love these characters. Thank you so much.

This has got to be one of, if not, the best stories I have seen on Literotica. Erotic, passionate and compelling reading. You say there is one final part after Ch 8. I'm waiting in anticipation to read it.

I couldn't stop reading this story only to rest my eyes, I fell in love with both the charcters, I see it has been awhile since you added to this story, I wish you would have one more chapter showing they were together happily.

waiting endlessly for the final part

THE STORY WAS SO ADDICTIVE

Because of the bizarre relation of teacher to pupil this story is special. The characters seem real but better than real. Please come back into the fold and write that final chapter. signed ... j

can't wait for the final chapter.

i'd read countless stories here on literotica and i love many many of them, but this is the first time i feel absolutely compelled to leave a comment. your story is uniquely special; a teacher-student storyline isn't uncommon around here, but the humorous, gentle, honest, beautiful and romantic qualities that embrace this story are.. and i am simply overwhelmed. please continue on writing this story the way you feel you want it, whether it's another final chapter or a couple more.. but please, do give it the beautiful finish corinn and madison so wonderfully deserve.

My wife doesn't get why I always like to read the lesbian stories. The answer is simple: the depth of the characters, the plot, and sheer sensuality.

Bravo Zulu, well done

Do not take heed of the cracker who called you a bitch...;>) It was/is a super story, loved it.

Straight Guy

i agree with the others,this is my public outcry as well,keep writing about madi and cori please please please

Seriously?

The Bitch is a bad but in a good way. Tears were flowing when the proposal was made. I dont want to comment on it more and give away the story but this is a good read and I look forward to reading all 10 chapters.

I so love this story.

I love this story, this series, more than butter pecan ice cream, more than peanut butter and strawberry jelly sandwiches. The Bitch is absolutely one of The Best!

I can't get enough of The Bitch

Such a wonderful story. Love it.

I love this shit do much omg I want It to be a movie or a never ending story

I just love HEA. Don't you