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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
oops

you posted the story twice?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Fantastic Fantastic

Two fantastics for the double post. Pages 5 - 8 were just as well written and erotic as 1 - 4. Have moved you into my top ten Lit authors category. Thank you for the read.

zaxxonzaxxonover 13 years agoAuthor
Explanation

Somehow Literotica messed up. The text for the story was inserted twice, even though I submitted it in Word format. This story ends on page 4, and then begins again. Everything after that is redundant. I'm in the process of straightening this out with Literotica. Very frustrating. Sorry guys.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Another Classic

Like the Westville series, the BBT story is just as entertaining. Hopefully you will find plenty of inspiration for further adventures. Good going!

YahowshuwaYahowshuwaover 13 years ago
Loved it.

Great to see some new stuff from you Zaxxon, looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Aunt Vicky?

Awesome, but please please please do another one with Jake and his mom from the Aunt Vicky series - would LOVE to see him titfuck his mom again!

CerchCerchover 13 years ago
Welcome back

This was so fucking awesome

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Awesome!

This was sooooo good! Great story, favorited! :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
great story

great work, lots of potential for more chapters too

WannabeMilfsdWannabeMilfsdover 13 years ago
Yeah you are BACK!

Yeah so glad you are back!

Please tell us what Sarah is doing these days!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
great story!

amazing characters and katelynn is hottt.

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