All Comments on 'The Blameless Bystander Ch. 02'

The authour has done a good job with setting up the central character and the conflicts in the story.

Well written, it promises more good things to come.

Nice work.

I find the Writer's portrayal of Education in conflict to be quite relevant and timely. I'm enjoying this story quite a lot! Well Written!

A well written sombre but intriguing view of life through the eyes of an ex-priest! Coming originally from a small town, I find the interplay between the central characters quite stimulating. Looking forward to a good series! Pete.