All Comments on 'The Blow Off'

Nice to see a good guy win for once, and I really enjoyed the planning she did too.

This is blazing hot!!! And marvellously written.

Perhaps one of the best one-on-one scenes I've read in a long while.

Fantastic story. You are one hot chick that any guy would be glad to meet. And not piss off too :) Keep those stories coming.

Really enjoyed this story, Jenno. Love the way you don't hold back one bit when describing the sex in detail. The "preamble" was helpful, too, to put the tale in perspective. The revenge fuck, especially with the grateful, good guy Buster after overhearing boyfriend Michael, the jerk's, comments about you, made for real-world motivation. And the story you'd previously told Buster made it all the more credible. Your conversational writing style makes for an easy read, too, with a good balance between dialogue and exposition. Just one criticism: There are numerous typos and small word omissions that show your over-reliance on spellcheck, which misses those kinds of errors. It's also easy for the writer's eye to miss them, and a good way to catch those mistakes is to edit by starting at the end of the story and read the last sentence, then the next-to-last one, and so on until you get to the beginning. Alternatively, have someone who has not read the story before edit it for you.

That is probably the best story I've read, I wish I had a good guy like Buster! Keep up the good work!

Another very hot submission by Jennifer, and it works on so many levels.

The plot's straightforward but what makes it special is the amount of detail you gave us. First-person makes everything more vivid and memorable.

Thanks!

Jenno, what a great read. You are one hell of a sexy writer who can...well...write! The sex is great, in part because of the build up, your descriptions are realistic and sensual and highly erotic and best of all, they give me a hard on! You are one of the reasons this site is so successful, well done and keep up the good work.

i like your stories very much, and hope you write more of them. i get sooo turned on reading your stories.....your sexiness comes across, and i get the real sense that you are one hottie. i especially like the fact that you write from personal experiences. these kinds of stories (fem exhibitionism) are believable when told from a sexy chicks perspective, as opposed to a guy writing about the adventures. but i think you are even more special, because you seem to have a good mix of down-to-earthyness and hot potootie-ness. (cool lingo huh?) ...which seems to be rare, or just elusive to me. why haven't you written anything in '07?

Very good story, loved it!

very hot story... LOVED IT!

this left me very wet and hot

would've pissed me off, but she left the douche at the end, which recovered it. still wish she'd dumped his ass before fucking the guy though, so, for excellent description, and more than decent writing, despite a few awkward internal dialogue moments, 4**** from me. ;) I realize a 5 is really the only "decent" score, but I couldn't give less of a shit about statistics. To me, it deserves a 4, and that's not bad. Just not QUITE 5 material.

Well done, Jennifer. Very sexy and steamy seduction. Does that "O" in your name stand for "Orgasm"?

But why such hate towards guys who are possessive.Michael was possessive and just to make him look bad you kept on adding bad things about him.

it is an accessible style, meaning it flows easily and doesnt use big words folks dont understand, and it conveys ideas/thoughts/feelings that resonate with the reader. Provides great insight into the mind of a sexy, young women!

Btw that pic you have posted is hot af. My god woman, you are built like the proverbial brick shithouse.

This was just superb. Your writing is terrific. Seems to me you must really be something of an exhibitionist; if not you can certainly imagine it very well. The writing is quite erotic and the story builds to a terrific climax (well, a lot of climaxes). Please keep writing. Your work is superb. I am going to assume that you have been too busy with your painting to write for the past years. Well, even though that's a disappointment for us, it's probably great for you. I painted for years but let it slide so that I could buy groceries. Ha. Thanks again for your efforts on our behalf.