All Comments on 'The Blue Bed'

But as a piece of fiction, damned GOOD! Possibly the best piece I have ever seen here. Your talent is totally wasted here! Start publishing on Literary magazines and getting some money for this!

Excellent work!

Regards!

You have one smooth style in writing. It was almost like a Sam Spade narrative that carried the reader through the story unable to leave it.

Congratulations on some work which when you improve your style will be splendid.

It's taken me a while to get back online. But I did it!! Sorry it took me so long. And I did so enjoy editing this for you. It looks very good in print. The story is so awesome. I couldn't stop once I began and had to read it all the way through first before beginning to do my job for you. And I do hope you take some of your reader's advise and start making some money for yourself with your writing. Any help you need, I'm here for you. Thanks for sharing this with me.