All Comments on 'The Bluebird and the Sparrow Ch. 03'

is there any chance of this series. You left us hanging.

The women are too quick to recover from what is described as awesome orgasms. Then they immediately want to turn around and eat out the other's pussy. I think the story should indicate more of a period of recovery before turning to the other woman. It is as if the orgasm was not as powerful as described. Just my take. But it is common to many stories like this.

I have loved reading this story... You wrote it so that you feel like you personally know these characters. Please come back to finish it. Ohh this is killing me, there's 2 unfinished series that I've recently read that just left me hanging.