All Comments on 'The Bondage Inheritance'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

great start

KramBKramBabout 9 years ago
It's Fiction

Great story. Keep writing and don't let the jerk who wrote the negative review get to you. I liked the lead in to the story and how it built to a hot ending. Some may not think it is realistic, but it is fiction so make it go the way you want. The cluelessness of Nicole is entirely possible as my own kids have not a clue what their parents did sexually, and never will.

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarabout 9 years ago
Good Story

I like this story. Hopefully, you'll continue it and we'll get to see how nicole grows under Morgan's tutelage.

caesarionr69caesarionr69about 9 years ago
Wow

just Wow, an amazing erotic story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great

Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
WOW

You have done it again. Another fantastic read. THANK YOU.

lowkeyonelowkeyoneover 8 years ago
WOW AGAIN

I just reread your story. Bloody fantastic. I wrote the previous comment as Anonymous.

Liz_57Liz_57over 8 years ago
So cool!

I really like your stories, so much fun.

AndrewmsailingAndrewmsailingabout 8 years ago
Very good.

Exciting, and a willing, truly consensual power exchange. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Different scene. Not necessarily believable, but well written and enjoyable.

no3putzno3putzover 7 years ago
praise

this is by far one of the best stories i have read thanks for sharing well written

maark30maark30over 6 years ago
Beautifuly written story

Beautifully written story, I cant wait to read more of your stuff.

ErinlinymphoErinlinymphoabout 4 years ago

I am submissive, three. Love your stories. It's always a joy and a really yummy experience to read. Never fails to get me going. Thank you

DevilbobyDevilbobyalmost 4 years ago
Exciting

Don't think I have read anything quite like that before.

Enjoyed it.

bumblegrumbumblegrumover 3 years ago
Excellent

HeyAll, you never disappoint, certainly not this time. This is a fascinating exploration of what you have called “the submissive gene”, and I have a sense that this is something you have explored before, in depth. Your stories are always well written, with an emphasis on correct construction, grammar and word choice. I could see both Nicole and Morgan in my minds eye, a most pleasant experience. Thank you once again - well worth all five stars, more if they were available.

nyteramblernyterambleralmost 2 years ago

Having been to bdsm clubs an in the life style for a time it was very good descriptions and very true on the topic. Very good story.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great story, I hope you continue writing it, was half expecting the masked man to be the lawyer. Maybe have him come in latter idk just a suggestion.

AnonymousAnonymous8 days ago

Fantastic what a gift her mother gave Nicole and Morgan is incredible

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