All Comments on 'The Book of David Ch. 05'

It keeps getting better and better. Excellent!

I am a regular fan of literotica and your submissions rank among the best. I am truly guesstimating with whom David will settle down finally, whether Cherys/Amber or a new character. Superbly interesting read.

This last couple of chapters seem like a far cry from the first couple. It seemed like Monica and David would find a way back. Now there's the Amber situation and all that. Still good, but i liked it when it was David and someone he truly cared about.

Great sex scenes! But the plot keeps bringing me back. I believe David will hookup and maybe more with Amber. More! More!

It was like, I was there... enjoying both views...their suffering and their joy...It was like these memories of reading this story are added to my own and take a place in my heart.

In real life we are too much in focus of are bad memories that

we don't enjoy are good ones. Well this is a good one, I will

remember it for awhile. ps ..I like the entire series.

keep it the good work.

Paragon

I have always been a fan of your work, but this story is definitely one of my favorites, if not the favorite of the bunch..You have great characters, interesting plot twists and powerfully crafted erotic scenes...Calling this a simple stroke story would be doing this story injustice. As it is, I can't wait to see what you come up with, and it will definitely be interesting to know how the story ends and who our boy David ends up with in the end.

Great story very long, real, and emotional.

hate you for killing Ellie, but this omg was sooo sooo good. Funny stuff made me laug so hard.

There are many authors on Lit that write hot sex scenes and many that write great engaging stories. There are probably none that do it better than you.

I knew it was coming, but the encounter with Amber at the party still felt like a kick in the gut.

Come for the sex. Stay for the story. Well done.

Superbly written, but the quasi-incest really puts me off.

The only thing wrong with your stories is that there aren't enough of them! But then again there could probably never be enough of them.

The only thing wrong with your stories is that there aren't enough of them! But then again there could probably never be enough of them.

an awesome story! so sexy and erotic! Thanks for sharing with us!

because this chap captures more of the development of David and Amber's relationship than in the later chapters. Their precious conversations are so heartwarming and the last chapter needed more of these

Finally something good actually happens at the end of a chapter.

What they said, come for the sex, stay for the story. Well done man. I'll be reading on.

You paint a picture with your words so that it feels that your readers are really there with the characters. The beautifully detailed descriptions give each scene an intensity that is amazing! More! MORE!

... I mean the story :)

J

David is "The Man"!!...and his smugness, while well-deserved here, needs to be tempered with his humanity...

The emotionally of these chapters is wonderful...engaging and demanding the reader pay attention!! Like others, is the reason I keep coming back!

Amber...?? And Elizabeth?? Their reactions were just precious, seeing David at Carmita's party; Amber's apparent jealousy is concerning to me...her background allows her to have that 'entitlement' attitude, which, in regard to David, is unwarranted as she has never really OVERTLY asked for any type of commitment!!?? This is gonna have to iron out, and SOON!!

**5**SYARS...AGAIN!!