All Comments on 'The Book of David Ch. 06'

Don't stop now, it keeps getting better.

Too bad the scale only goes to 5! I'd give you a 10 for these stories any day. Keep up the great work.

You've done it again, Blue dragon! this is one of the very best stories at the site, and it is SO hot. Keep it going, and I hope there are many more stories to come. Incidentally, any chance of revisiting John Billionaire?

I'll be interested as to where some of these tangential relationships go. I don't care for how some of these people behave; but you wouldn't have a story if there wasn't conflict.

Can't wait for more!

Excellent work as always, BDA. Can't wait for the threesome with his sister.

- Pete

You've got to be the TOP AUTHOR on this site. You produce magnificent erotica. Keep it up. I am a loyal fan. You've on my favorites.

Your stories are the best!!!

You are by far my favourite author in this site since day one!!!

Keep the stories coming!! We enjoy every single word!!!

10 out of 5 for this one!!!

The only thing is in this chapter, Amber says that her breasts are real. But wasn't it in an earlier chapter she says something to the effect that her daddy bought her a boob job?

YUM

great flippin story loving it except he should have nailed his sister and her girlfriend they both want him BAD!

I believe you're talking about Vanessa.

Amber is such a sweet and deep character. BDA, props for the inclusion of all the little details in Amber's dialogue and body language that betray her true emotions. Just thought that was really well done

My expression the whole time I was reading this chapter :D nuff' said. Expect whenever that dickhead Randall was involved. I hate when douchebags get to have fun in stories.

Im not into the multiple sex thing... i think Davids character is awesome but amber needs to be similar cuz it would be more sweet :) when amber said i dont mind if u fuck other ppl im like What??? Why??? Lol

Probably a bad ideafor me to read this at work. Lol. Well done

My dick is so fucking sore, I wonder why ???

...as in, I can't believe it - beyond believable. And I don't care!

Hard to reconcile with pre-conceived Amber, but damned hot nonetheless.

J

To fall for loser like randall...

Comments go back 16 years from here and it is Nov 2023. My first time through this story and I see I am not the only one giving it 5 stars. To tell the truth, I am very stingy with my 5 star rating and I have used it since Ch 1. Not the first time I have used it with this author but, to this extent? Yet, I would consider myself a biased ass to use any less rating. (The Whoo)