All Comments on 'The Boss'

I just don't get it.

try to follow a plot of some type. Written badly and simply it sucks.

What was this about? I have read many stupid stories, but this takes the price!!! I thought there would be a twist somewhere, but no. Where does The Boss come into the picture?

Was this accidentally posted before being finished?

If this is indicative of what you have been posting, you need to stop.

?? What is this?

If you have to watch your wife fuck someone else to get hard you have a serious problem. But they both seem happy in their little cuckboy world. Have at it you two.

Total piece of crap, & that's the best thing I could say about it. She's a slut, he's a cum-sucking wimp; and the author should start taking his meds again.

Please get a day job and forget writing. Even if you don't need one, it will spare us this tripe.

Pathetic?

Not worth the time spent to read it.

I don't get it.

0 stars

That's one where the lazy ass writer didn't even put any effort in writing the crappy story!

I think that this is part of a longer story, you left the beginning and ending/follow up out. Do the prep and ending to the story, you may get better ratings.

Could add more background info.

What a poor excuse of a story. If I could give negative, I would have. Don't give up your DAY JOB because this ain't writing.