All Comments on 'The Boys Next Door Ch. 01'

Absolutely fabulous, well written, developed characters, 10*

really I need more

Possibly the best story I've ever read on this site... more please!! :-)

A very polished and engaging story! I can't wait to read more of this and whatever else you have to offer. Just judging by these three pages you have a lot of talent and a very promising start. Well done!!

Amazing. Need more

Must be one of the best storys here.

I loved everything about this. Please keep doing this, write for us

The absolute best story I have read on here. Please post more soon!

Long-time visitor of literotica but this is my first time commenting - this story is SO HOT. I loved it! Please write more!

Loved the differences in the brothers and they way the seduced her. I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, to be thoroughly fucked like that!!

part 2?

Thanks for all your positive feedback, everyone. Chapter 2's been submitted and should show up on the site this weekend. :)

Please, please, please!? So hot.

So hot and so beautiful!

This is the best thing I've read on lit erotica in years

Don't often read group anymore, but I can see this is one not to be missed -- great story. Sexy virgin serviced by two hot studs. I look forward to reading more :)

I've read all 3 chapters so far, twice, and I can't get enough! The character development makes the story so much hotter. Don't leave us hanging, I can't take it!

This is erotica at its best. Hope you continue to write. Would love to see more stories by you. Have you considered writing a story with a similar theme (mfm) but with an older age range?

Thanks! I do have some stories in the works with older characters. So far, they're all mf. This particular story line caught me by surprise -- I never really expected to write about a threesome -- but it's been so much fun, who knows what might come next.

A great story, well told.

please continue to write, these are fantastic

these are amazing, please update!

Wow, like one reader already said, this is erotica at its best. Can't wait to read the rest in the series. This one is amazing.

Well written. Thank you.

That was... awesome. Thank you

I'm so sorry to have to tell you this, but your bloody fantastic story got stolen by an overly eager magpie:

http://archiveofourown.org/chapters/15192838?show_comments=true&view_full_work=false#comment_59492260

She's been called out on it and myself and my friends have left comments. I also plan on outing her on Tumblr.

I am so sorry this happened to you, btw. I loved this series very much. It actually inspired some of my own writing so please know that we have your back and that, again, I apologize for the hurt this must cause. I told her to delete the story and hopefully she will but you may want to leave a comment yourself just in case.

Lademonessa -- thanks so much for letting me know, and I appreciate you taking action. I'm a little confused, though; the link you included took me to an M/M story about Clark Kent and Lex Luthor. Different story? Same story? In any case, authors appreciate it when readers bring plagiarism to light. Much too easy to do on the internet, and I've been through it a few times with this series already.

Thank you for this entry into new series. Very hot. Want my own sex treehouse

I am now a huge fan and going to read all of your work.

Loved it!

Now I want to find myself some twins...

This story is perfection. I can't wait to read more.

An awesome read, has me captivated completely.

I need to have this in real life. So good. So. Good.

This was beautiful. I've read both of your books on this story between her and the twins. Oh my God, fabulous!

Sexy Fantasy!

Your writing shows surpassing skill and craft, and your ideas ooze sexiness. The fantasy works so well for me, because I find I want to be in the middle of every one of your stories. Thanks so much, and well done!

You're so good it hurts - thanks for sharing with us!

You describe these scenes vividly, I keep returning to read again and again. 10/10

the pinnacle of all fiction. this is one of the best if not the best pieces of fiction i have consumed my entire life. the writing is impeccable and absolutely perfect. i tried this on my wife and she was very aroused. 11/10