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BigJohn601BigJohn601about 13 years ago
Wow! When you jump back in, you come in blazin'....

You are turning me into a fan. I have enjoyed all your stories and especially love your character developement. Can't wait till the next installment posts. Thanks.

SuperHeroRalphSuperHeroRalphabout 13 years ago
It's always a pleasure

Its' always a pleasure to ready your work, my friend.

Your stories just get better.

Andtheend, BOSTONFICTIONWRITER, CarBuffStuff, PositiveThinker, WmForrester, and now, SuperHeroRalph.

bruce22bruce22about 13 years ago
Very Good Story

This guy is a winner, but slightly overly modest.

One thing that came up when I thought about this story is whether or not the merry go rounds still offer a chance to grab the brass ring? And, how many people would still know what the term means?

KarenEKarenEabout 9 years ago
Re-Reading

I've completely forgotten how this goes, but I'm liking the start!

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