All Comments on 'The Brass Ring Ch. 03'

I just found chapters 1 & 2, so got to read up to this point at one sitting. You tell a great story and I was greatly entertained with the names of childhood friends. I must have missed out on something, because my school mates pretty much just went by their real names.

Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next chapter.

Looking forward to the next installment. Thanks.

The thing is, two up and two down, will this be different. Other than the fact he does not feel he measures up to her, there is still the problem that she seems too good to be true.... There has to be some ants at the picnic!

Another great tale in the making. Keep it coming; please!

enjoyable read, as always.

I realize relationships without conflict can make for a boring story, but somehow it seems wrong to take two people who seem so right together and make something mess them up.

I know that hasn't happened YET, I', just hoping it DOESN'T happen <wink>!