The Brass Ring Ch. 03

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"That's nice ... a nice family. What do the boys want to do when they are out of school?"

"Ralph is working on a mechanical engineering degree," she said proudly. "I know he'd like to get involved with the automobile industry. Calvin hasn't decided anything yet. He's the 'free spirit' in this family. He's going to be a little later maturing."

"And Merilee is in the accounting department," I mentioned. "She must have a business degree."

"Yes, she did very well at college. She wants to prove to herself that she can make it on her own without help. Gerry says she's doing great at the dealership. We're very proud of her."

"Nice family," I repeated. I was envious, thinking how ideal this family was: well off, well educated, handsome men, and beautiful women. Perfect!

Merilee bounded down the stairs two at a time and skipped across the room to me, full of enthusiasm.

"Let's go," she said, pulling at my arm. "The stores are open and time's a-wasting."

I might have known. The shopping magnet was on full force. No woman can resist it.

To be continued...

Editing by ErikThread and DaveT with my thanks for their thoroughness and helpful suggestions. Any errors are mine.

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KarenEKarenEover 9 years ago
Drama

I realize relationships without conflict can make for a boring story, but somehow it seems wrong to take two people who seem so right together and make something mess them up.

I know that hasn't happened YET, I', just hoping it DOESN'T happen <wink>!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Ready for the next chapter

enjoyable read, as always.

mtoldman33mtoldman33about 13 years ago
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Another great tale in the making. Keep it coming; please!

bruce22bruce22about 13 years ago
Pleasant, enjoyable read

The thing is, two up and two down, will this be different. Other than the fact he does not feel he measures up to her, there is still the problem that she seems too good to be true.... There has to be some ants at the picnic!

BigJohn601BigJohn601about 13 years ago
Fine series so far.....

Looking forward to the next installment. Thanks.

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