All Comments on 'The Brass Ring Ch. 04-05'

interesting story, thanks

don't act so dumb.

Deiter seems to need getting hit along side the head to realize some people give good advice. Good story and I really appreciate that the chapters come out on a regular basis.

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So far this is another great coaster2 story. I love it, the story line is amazing. Another great coaster2 effort. Keepem comin, and thanks for sharing

That's life. One just never knows if we are making the right one especially where choosing a life partner. With a national divorce rate of over sixty percent, society makes it almost too easy for a do over. So let's hope Dieter makes the right one. Fine story that I look forward to reading everyday.

One sharp blow after another. After she confessed setting him up on the car deal he should have removed her from her dating list. It is just a question of opportunity. Where was Merrilee's head when she should have reacted?? Very strange behaviour. It sound as if she was consciously cheating and she is not sure if she can go the loyal route..

Until now, it was a narrative - a good narrative, and fun to read. Now it is a story with some unresolved issues. Very well done.

I don't know about JoJo, people do change as they grow up. But Marla's warning was not casual.

Merilee was carefully described as staring at a far distant place before and after her meeting with Dieter. During their meeting she did not smile, yet before she was described as socially skillful with a ready smile. She has some weighty decisions to make. Could she be in trouble? Pregnant? Something's keeping her down.

Looking forward to more.

Keep writing so I can keep reading.

Well worth time to read - as I have always found most of your stories to be.

Thanks for posting it.

REALLY appreciate your speed in putting out the chapters!!!!!!

m.i.l. has a nose for these things, huh? well, that brings merilee to mind. i think i would have cooled off a little more than duke, though and found out a little more abt merilee and a.hole before gettin rancid. kind of weak-duke with her parents and wondering what to do abt merilee. also, u really dont think it a little kiss-ass for him to be calling her back? well, he found out she lied to him. thank, rc

She SAYS she's being looked after by her ex, there's no way for Dieter to know, yet.

Dieter seems so desperate for a woman that he can't see the hussy looking for thenext rich husband and father for her sons!!

ANOTHER WEAK WIMPY MC