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"You listen to Marla, Son. She's got a nose for this kind of thing. I don't want to see you hurt either. Both of us have had enough of that. Things are goin' good for us. I hope she's not some gold-digger that just wants into your pockets as well as your pants."
"Okay, you two. I'll be careful, but I think you're over-reacting. Joanna's not like that. Money isn't a problem for her. She's been looked after by her ex. She's doing okay." I was getting a little peeved at the way they were digging at Joanna. They didn't even know her.
To be continued
Editing by ErikThread and DaveT with my thanks for their thoroughness and helpful suggestions. Any errors are mine.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoDieter seems so desperate for a woman that he can't see the hussy looking for thenext rich husband and father for her sons!!
ANOTHER WEAK WIMPY MC
KarenEabout 9 years agoShe SAYS she's being looked after by her ex, there's no way for Dieter to know, yet.
Anonymousabout 13 years agom.i.l. has a nose for these things, huh? well, that brings merilee to mind. i think i would have cooled off a little more than duke, though and found out a little more abt merilee and a.hole before gettin rancid. kind of weak-duke with her parents and wondering what to do abt merilee. also, u really dont think it a little kiss-ass for him to be calling her back? well, he found out she lied to him. thank, rc
KenfromIndyabout 13 years agoKeep writing so I can keep reading.
Well worth time to read - as I have always found most of your stories to be.
Thanks for posting it.
REALLY appreciate your speed in putting out the chapters!!!!!!
grogers7about 13 years agoUntil now, it was a narrative - a good narrative, and fun to read. Now it is a story with some unresolved issues. Very well done.
I don't know about JoJo, people do change as they grow up. But Marla's warning was not casual.
Merilee was carefully described as staring at a far distant place before and after her meeting with Dieter. During their meeting she did not smile, yet before she was described as socially skillful with a ready smile. She has some weighty decisions to make. Could she be in trouble? Pregnant? Something's keeping her down.
Looking forward to more.
