All Comments on 'The Brass Statuettes Ch. 03'

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PEATBOGPEATBOGover 16 years ago
Well done!!!

I really enjoyed this chapter. The day by day working of Corporate America and the day by day operations (intrigue) of the true power behind the men – the "Brass Statuettes"! I am beginning to like and appreciate these women and their importance in the scheme of things. Their success with Trudy may be limited since she is not cut from the same material as they are. Or is she? Only time will tell and we are in for an interesting time. Pete.

bruce22bruce22over 16 years ago
Er!

I like the writing and most of the structuring though both Gloria and Alvin rub me the wrong way, but I did not find that disappointment was an appropiate description of the chapter. It is more filling in the background.

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333over 11 years ago

You are doing. Good job of writing these characters as detestable. I know they are trouble and I want to see them ruined. Thanks.

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