All Comments on 'The Bull'

yep when do the divorce paper arrive?

bunch a bull crap

1 star

The twisted end, deserved 3*...This is what happens when husband and wife don't talk about their feelings...I would like to know what his reaction will be...Divorce? By his tone it's certain it is...

I get the desired shock value at the end, but the best part of the story is what happens next. How does she react to that statement? Are they done? Is there revenge? It most of these loving wife stories its what happens after the incident that make it a good or bad story.

Just another comment...No way at all that after all she had done while engagement, in the marriage, during honeymoon and after they returned home, she still can say she loves him...She loves the rich life he gives her...that's all...

A sequel would challenge you as a writer, and, as one reader, I would enjoy reading how you deal with this situation. Would fulfilling his fantasy as the bull balance things?

sounds like the whore made a slight mistake no replay DIVORCE seems very possible now. unless she brings a cpl dozen of her girl friends over to fuck her hubby. yes gf and not boyfriends. id say she better become nothing more than a carpet muncher from no on because if they do stay together hubby will be watching her and id still say she better be prepared to supply him with a few dozen new gfs to experience. i agree Ill fuck my wife so hard her eyes will pop out another guy can watch but only to watch how a real man fucks not to himself

How do I know whether or not I like this story if I don't read it? I didn't like it, but that's the way it goes.

You can be the bull next time.

Problem solved.

She's just a lying, dirty,disgusting,filthy pig. The marriage is a sham she never loved him, why waste his time . Honesty from the start in a relationship even before you get married, she hated sleeping with him so why not guide him from go to what you like. He's probly done with her , realizing that she didn't just fuck that guy for the first time and will start to dig for more info. Also he must be the biggest idiot not realizing she been fucking so many others and making a fool of him with them around. A big joke with everyone on on it except him

out from the bedside table and blew the stupid cunt's brain all over the room.

"And now it's time to cut off your chosen bull's balls and give them to the dog", with that he walked out of the house.

Really, really good. I had suspicion, but it still hit like a bolt of lightning with the set up. Of course, if one thought it through, all of the fantasy sex was with him chucking the husband, even though the husband had his name.

No straight guy wants to be a little cuck.

and better.

your statement at the beginning is as ridiculous as the story.

"This is a work of fiction. If you don't like it, don't read it."

How, pray tell, can you know "If you don't like it,"

before you read it?

Did you mean to warn people to not read a work of fiction? Or to suggest that some unknown subject matter was contained within the work of fiction that some might find objectionable?

Now, if you had said this story contains xxxx and yyyy and if you do not like either of those, don't read it, maybe such a statement at the beginning would have been instructive.

As it is, if you meant it to be a warning, it isn't.

Just a schmuck with a slut wife... So where's the story go from here? Divorce? Revenge? Of course Mrs. Fucktoy doesn't give a rats ass about her marrage. She could care less if anyone loved her. She's just meat. And so much for trusting her. He could just use her as the slut she is. Tie her to a bench and have all his buddies gangbang her every weekend. Gave it a 3.

Honestly, the story is actually about how people describe it. Not horrible. Any cuck would find this a decent read. But that fucking last line had me in stitches. I don't need a followup. It's fucking great just like it is. I don't know if you meant it to be funny, or as the cliffhanger ending to the next story where the husband goes nuts, but I found it fucking hilarious. I never read a story on here with a punch line ending, but you did it. Bravo.

Slut/Cuck with no ending -- *1*

Keep writing, that was a dandy!

hahaha story was quite average but the last two sentences were classic quality moved it from 1. to a 4

Dan has a long way to go. Liked your story. There are several good moments. I found your stories, I have a surprise for you, Is that the way you like it, who got seconds.

Good story.

Another trash story polluting loving wives by a trash writer.

Great story, laughed at the ending - good job.

You are a gifted writer. I especially like the exposition in the beginning about Gina's sexual history--very good character development! She definitely taught Dan how to be a good fuck, which is fantastic for their marriage. The ending is hilarious. It would be very interesting to get another chapter, but even if not, this story is lovely as a standalone. Although the cuckold scenario is not uncommon on this site, it is the way that you tell it that makes it such a treat to read. Thank you. 5 stars!

Now that was funny.

Ha, Ha, Ha. At the end the twist was great. I bet 100% divorce.

The wife thought the husband was wannabe cuckold and she got a divorce...........Lol

And I'm sure a divorce is in their future however I would have liked more dialog at the end. To see if Gina was actually sorry for what she did. Probably not but thats just my feeling.

Great twist at the end. Communication...can't be overstated.

Very good but ends too abruptly.

And then it fell off the cliff. Far too short. We needed to see the fall out. It was obvious that without talking to her husband, that she had screwed up and was about to commit marital suicide. Of course he could have simply knocked over the chair and gotten free (I mean really - those padded handcuffs are toys and easily destroyed). He probably couldn't believe his eyes. And since you had him still tied to the chair he probably should have waited until she released the cuffs until he hit her between the eyes with the truth. You never know what she might have done to him had he still been restrained. That was only one reason you needed to continue this further. BAH!

And I thought I was the only one who read cuck stories and put myself in the place of the bull.

Nice twist but she really is a no good dirty lying cheating cunt who has no respect for her husband. Would've loved a follow up of the after math of this and him realizing she's been doing this all along. When free he should really fuck her ass than tell her to get the fuck out. She doesn't deserve a good man

Luvved it!

Big Smile today!

Beyond excellent.

I enjoyed how you showed what can happen with a lack of communication. The brilliance of the end had me laughing.

Thank you for writing.

from another story which was better written and had a real ending. don't remember the author, though.

Plagiarism...1*

as to how despicable a woman and wife she was, not enough payoff at the end for the husband. This unbalanced portrayal lacked the subtlety and finer details that could make such a tale believable.

another cocksucking wimp posting dumb cuck SHIT.

divorce, slut ends up fired and goes into the porn industry. later quits because shes a dried up hag. Dan goes and finds a decent wife.

I want to read about their lives leading up to the divorce and the 'consequences' he dishes up to Jeff........5* if it gets finished.

Well, supergenius, how are we supposed to know whether we like it or not unless we read it?

And no, didn't care for it.

Bye.

As someone else said, they should have been talking about each others thoughts on their sex life. After her performance, it wouldn't take a genius to realize where her experience and language came from. And now that she knows that he wanted to be the bull, she must realize why he was so muted regarding sex with her. Anyway, what are the bets on them staying together? She's already has her regular fuck buddies and now she knows what he wants. Will she accept the shoe on the other foot?

Gina sat at the dinner table enjoying the delicious meal Dan had prepared for her. "Dan, this meat is so tender and it tastes delicious." " What is it? " she asked.

" Nothing special sweetie, some friends recently slaughtered a young bull and I brought home a side. " "It's in the freezer in the basement." Dan answered.

" Well, it is so good honey , thank you for cooking for me. " "Speaking of bulls, have you seen Jeff around?" " He seems to have just disappeared. "

"Funny you should ask. " I actually saw him earlier today. " " He was just chilling. " Dan smiled .

Like others comments the last line saved it for me, sex should always cum with humour and you managed to achieve this after a very predictable storyline. I like "wife-sharing" stories so your story got a 5* from me however,

without the last line it would fall into the 3* effort. There are just so many stories of a similar theme