All Comments on 'The Bullpen Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Fantastic!

Well-written, thought out and paced. You've done an excellent job so far. Looking forward to the rest! Thanks for the fine work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Great Story

Well writen, holding my attention and waiting for the next installment.

Julia

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Love the Storyline

Superb writing, I like the development of the story. Be encouraged, I'm waiting for the next instalment!

Anonymous
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