All Comments on 'The Butterfly Effect Pt. 01'

I loved the build up. Hurry up already with the other parts. Hope he fucks her ass!

Great descriptions and build up. Keep going, please.

Well? So far you’re pushing a five. Waiting—-? Well? Think it out. We are all in suspense. Well?

Awaiting the main course...threesome, foursome, swap meet, or all of the above.

Sorry but your use of Gods instead of the usually normal God is driving me insane. Has nobody yet enlightened you about this. Not just this story but ALL of them has this bloody word in them. If you want to learn to write in English then the first thing you have to change is "GODS".