All Comments on 'The Cabin on The Blue'

Great story. Everything fits perfectly. Cannot wait

Great story telling, I look forward to the next chapter.

I love this story and really hope there will be at least a part 2!

I wished it wasn’t so long because I have work to do but couldn’t stop reading. Captive reader ;) 5*

This didn’t seem like non con to me (except maybe the pressure for sex) so I’m intrigued to see where this story goes.

Not sure it's in the right section, since the reluctance is purely practical. Seems like a good romance to me...

It’s a fantastic story, not in the right category, but you got 5 stars from me anyways. You’ve set up a great world and I hope to see more from you.

The composition of your characters are so well thought out. John is perfect amount of everything utterly delicious! I look forward to the next installment. You have something special here!

Interesting story. Liked the premise and the characters. Liked the interaction and how they relate to each other. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks for your time and imagination.

John is the perfect man, she says! Sexy muscular chest and chest hair, treasure trail, big cock, he's a virtual love machine! Hope they stay together, as they are really good together and good for each other! Keep writing please!

It started out awesome then I turned from a well rounded story to just sex. The trip to town, for example, was an excellent place to flesh out the story with details.323py7

I'm confused by Rachel. The world has ended, and she's managed to find a oasis with a great guy who protects her, is hard working, considerate, gorgeous, hung, provides posh food and shelter, and gives her the best sex she's ever her. And yet, she's afraid she might develop feelings for him. Just what else is she expecting she's find? Also, neither seem to be very worried about roving bands, one of whom John had to kill with his bare hands. They act like they're vacationing at a make-believe "End of the World" theme park. As a result, its hard to find the story plausible, because neither seems very concerned about their current situation or the future.

I really love how you spent time developing the characters and plot. It was the erotica equivalent of great foreplay, lots of teasing and tension leading to a great pay off!

Great build up. Sexy man (I mean basically every female's wet dream -good work), and I was just itching for the part they get together. 5/5 from me. Didn't spot the non-con but not complaining as wouldn't have found this excellent story otherwise!

It reads like'chick-lit' with sex. Just an observation.