All Comments on 'The Café Pt. 03'

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Anonymousabout 4 years ago

Good, but SLOW

I assume you are going somewhere with this story, but it's sure taking you a long time to get there. Good rating, and interesting... but I think you need to move a little faster.

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Dr. Max Cummings Born Maximilian Audacious Rollo Cummings on 29 April 1889 in what was then the British South Indies. Sent, at an early age, to boarding school in England, he moved successively from Linbury Court Prep. School to Greyfriars before matriculating, with the under...

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