by TheJoker33
I like that the main character us more fleshed out in this one. She felt more real. Nice work!
Can't wait for more chapters. Plus, her girlfriends coming also? Damn this could turn into a hell of an orgy. Please keep writing.
Thank you everyone for your comments, I appreciate it. I am curently working on part 3 in my down time and will get it submitted as soon as I can. Thank you all for your patience.
I like the longer story! The thought of more girls getting in on the action is a turn on! 5*
With more girls coming there better be more guys too. The ratio needs to be better so the guys can get some resting time. A little more character development this time. Hopefully the new participants will have some interesting info.