All Comments on 'The Case Comes First'

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

First commercial DC3 flight was in June 36

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

A good storyline is more important to me than an all sex in every paragraph tale. This is good. I was thinking that you had a start for a longer novel if you expanded the details of your actual cases you were on, but then again with your detective being in a cage I can see why your story was a little shorter, if only for his sake.

fmp0927fmp09273 months ago

Nice to see you branching out and trying a new genre. An entertaining read.

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You'll probably see pretty quickly that I'm into chastity, teasing, denial and femdom. I don't live this lifestyle all of the time, but my fantasies bring me back here again and again. How 'bout yours?