All Comments on 'The Caterpillar'

Very unusial , I rarely read this type of a story, I must say it held my attention. It took one hell of an imagionation to put it together. Much less keeping it moving. Yes I enjoyed it. Good luck in the future.

Wow...I truly enjoyed your story. I'm a fan of tentacles and good sci-fi porn. Your stories are great...i pretty speechless, i enjoyed it that much..you have to keep writing!!!!

I have to say to this story is the best of the genre, its fuking amazing the amount of thought and creativity youve put into it. great work.

WOW!!! Is there any plans for future installments? Left me spellbound and wanting more!! Great imagination, writing techniques.

the best tentacle story i have ever read. perhaps another with sophia back in spain. great story. loved it

I just finished reading one of your other tenacle stories, and thought it could be replaced, how wrong I was this one tops it all, keep uo the good work, I hope that there will be more once sofia returns to europe? please????

I just finished reading three of your stories (1) Keily's Plant, (2) Nursing Girls (read this 3 times) needless its my favorite, and (3) The caterpillar, after I read Nursing Girls I was under impression, that it could not get any better, but you have truly out done yourself in all of your stories, as I mentioned in my comments of Nursing Girls you must have one heck of a imagination, you write your stories where the reader has a hard time of of putting them down without finishing them, your writing style is outstanding, I hope that you will continue to write stories such as these, goood luck you certainly deserve it, I will be looking for more of your stories in the future.

Joey

you made my day,loved every bit of it.

Not only erotic and eerie, but also a very interesting story. The build-up was slow, like the inevitable creep of kudzu. This would make an incredible illustrated story. Thanks!

Great story. Loved it. Imaginitive and well written. The caterpillar

sex club must continue. Perhaps Sofia could introdue her friend

to another passenger helping to spread the club in Europe...

Sandy could have an all female party...the cheerleaders could

meet the caterpillar..whatever as long as the story continues.

If you like any of my ideas you are more than welcome to use

them. I just want to read more. Thanks.

Great story. Loved it. Imaginitive and well written. The caterpillar

sex club must continue. Perhaps Sofia could introdue her friend

to another passenger helping to spread the club in Europe...

Sandy could have an all female party...the cheerleaders could

meet the caterpillar..whatever as long as the story continues.

If you like any of my ideas you are more than welcome to use

them. I just want to read more. Thanks.

I'm not really into this type of story but every time I would use the search function looking for keywords this story would pop up. So I finally broke down and read it... and what do you know- it turned me on quite a bit. I guess I should listen to the search function more often.

I don't know how old you are but I write alot like you do, as if we grew up reading the same forums. However, you have a wonderful talent to be able to write similiar situations without continuely repeating yourself when your describing your scenes. I also like how you never lose focus in any of the paragraphs that make up such a good and long story. the caterpiller is a great story. Again, with some of the writing talent submitted to this website, I can't understand why so many stories are here and not made into real books to where there'd be a chance for the person to make some money for their entertainment. Again, thank you for a great read.

this was a great story. i read the story in three parts, and by a stunning coincidence it followed what i imagined would be a good storyline. i loved it! thank you soo much

Truely Amazing. Best I have probably ever read... any where. l look forward to reading much more of your work. and also, thank you for your spelling.

best story i have ever read!

nice story mate i love it.

Great ball-churner, thanks!

the very best. very erotic. a great pleasure to read. pictures painted with words. amazingly erotic. More please....very please!!!

Great story... Stolen from a web site called 3D Monsters!

Its his site. Homealone_447 is the author of both the graphical and the literotica stories... Read his profile.

Loved how the story captured my attention. Wonderful

action oriented style. The idea of tentacles was

somewhat creepy, but if such a creature showed up

in my bedroom and I had 2-3 glasses of wine first -

............... well ????

Just about all of your work that I've read is very well written, and heavy with imagination. You are a very devious role-model.

Very good one as usual!

WOW. What a great sexy story... seemed so effortlessly written. Definitely one to read again and again... once I’ve recovered of course.