All Comments on 'The Cheat'

to be writing "Morality Play" tales.

Do you have any clue as to how sadistic and misogynistic your story is? You are one sick puppy!

No problem with it...good story.

By the end of the story, I had figured out that it was her own husband. What I didn't expect was that her husband essentially would set her up to become another man's whore, and then turn against her. It makes this a heart-wrenching, sad tale, but unfortunately I've seen that happen. As one poster commented, yes, it's quite misogynistic. It might be one thing if her husband had done it in order to bring out this new side to her, but it's quite another to be so cold towards a woman you're supposed to love. It's as if he was setting her up for failure all along.

Very strong, well-written story. Five stars. I don't look forward to continuing this theme, but it does get me to look forward to other works from the author.

I enjoyed it very much

Sick Shit

Frustrating pointless story replete with wall-to-wall sex. It fails at the most basic level, which is to entertain. One star