All Comments on 'The Cherry Poppers Ch. 02'

N.Y. Yankees rot big time!!!!!! Beantown Bosox & Portland Sea Dogs Rule big Time!!!!! Other than that, Very Good Story. Got anymore in your pen/computer?

Another excellent chapter!!!!!

Please keep em comeing.

I look forward to more in this story line.

Thank You

Looking forward to more of this story and wondering about that chinese virgin does he see her again? Does he keep seeing Lana? Looking forward to seeing more,

Thanks for the great read!!!

Enjoyed this immensely and look forward to more.

...HE'S THINKING TOO MUCH! Stop the thinking & get on with the FUCKING. His brother's right! The hymen is a pain in the ass(pussy)!

...I think the guy reading this story should REMEMBER that all the sports' teams are FICTIONAL!

Your story is cute. I like how nice Jason is.

But Lana is supposed to be Catholic. And Catholics usually say "their preists" not their pastors. Stiil good story!

Well written erotica indeed. Keep it up.

Damnit, More!

Oh, wait, On the right I see,

Another Chapter Happily

Waiting For Me.

Off I go.

Great job! Personally, I like how you portray this contest, and I like how well Jason considers Lana's feelings.

GREAT 1st time...! and espcially that he's WAY hung (+ she's deepthroating his whopper...!?!) and she's so tiny...

but, regarding her (sadly) shaved muffin.."..it impedes advancement..."

anypast girfriend, no matter how lush-either my tongue or phallus...like a hot knife through butter...

Somewhat surprised no note from author either before or after the story..I reaize this is total fiction BUT.just in case any very sheltered newbies reading this for tips-have to use another form of contraception for at least 30 days after she starts taking...