All Comments on 'The Cherry Poppers Ch. 21'

I love this series. I’m so glad you decided to continue the story, wherever it may lead. Keep it going, as long as possible.

I'm glad to see that you're still writing this series with Jason. That was another great chapter that you wrote. I like the way that you have Jason feeling guilty about the things that he is doing to the women and that he has a conscience. I can hardly wait to see what you do it the next chapter with Beth and the other two girls.

Once again another great chapter, can't wait for the next.

Please keep them rolling on.

You are a great writer. Can't wait to see more from you. I like that Jason is having some doubts it makes him a little more human and not just a sex machine.

...these girls are starting to run together in his mind. He should STOP & think about each ONE separately before he starts to lump them all together. Until he can think of each girl for herself, he's just going to turn into a machine & you having him feel for each 1 of them is what makes your story DIFFERENT!

All chapters good, but had special fondness for this one. Maybe something about Jillian. Maybe because I took a short break from the series, which has sustained my interest even through 21 (!) chapters.

Author does a great job of juggling Jason's relationships with many girls. And portraying their incredible (in both the sense of unreal and the sense of fantastic) wantonness for him and tolerance for the involvement of other girls at the same time.

Paul in Oklahoma