by eroslit
Excellent suspense so that the reader can actually picture the torment in the mother as she witnesses her daughter being violated and yet aroused. You create a very good tension and erotic heat especially in detailing the mother's oral servicing of her daughter
This lady can really write a suspensful NC story. I love her writing. Finally, a woman's perspective about rape. I love the mood she sets, the descriptions that only a woman can give. Keep it up...your writing makes me keep it up!
Trapper
Hi Traci !
Almost as good as "Vacation Photos" very Hot story .
The type I like .
Only way it could have been better is if it would have been in the first person.
Would have been a very hot Traci, Story.
Love
Sailor
this is the first story of yours I chose to read, Very nice. I look forward to reading them all. I alos, read your profile... I agree with your comment about Emma! Maybe we could do her together!
Anyone would have reported it. That's what you do and that's what made this tale unbelievable.
I know in text the girls were on their email after a couple of minutes but.... does that mean the daughter was watching porn? Lol