by BadLilKitty
Since the fantasy was just as much, if not more, his wife's as it was for him I would have liked for you to include the dialog from the babysitter instead of just describing it. The wife want to hear the sex and including the babysitter's dialog would have really brought that point home. As well as some verbiage describing the sounds of the tryst like how the blowjob sounded or how wet her pussy was as he thrust more and more frantically.