All Comments on 'The Christmas Wish'

by dlsloan

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H_Cheetah_2H_Cheetah_24 months ago

I open up Literotica on my birthday and there’s a new dlslone story! How lucky am I! Love your work!

dlsloandlsloan4 months agoAuthor

Thank you! Happy birthday!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Lost me in the stall.

dlsloandlsloan4 months agoAuthor

Fair enough. Honest, respectful feedback is always appreciated.

SexReader42SexReader424 months ago

One of the hottest stories I've ever read. I too was not a huge fan of the stall, but it was nice to have a break from the other sections. Love to see more like this.

dlsloandlsloan4 months agoAuthor

Thank you! I appreciate your feedback.

cutelilhottiecutelilhottie4 months ago

Awesome! It was hot. I actually like the stall bit was a kinky little unexpected twist. Would love to see more stories!

dlsloandlsloan4 months agoAuthor

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I hope to be writing more soon.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Glad to see you back! Not sure if the End means the story is finished or just this chapter, but looking forward to more.

dlsloandlsloan4 months agoAuthor

Thank you! This is the full story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

you're back ! great story. hope you enjoyed writing it as much as we enjoy reading it.

dlsloandlsloanabout 2 months agoAuthor

I did! It felt good to do some writing again. Thank you for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I loved it - I spotted a few typos:

I pushed his hand inside her thong --> I pushed my hand inside her thong

Either she needed to get off on being his plaything --> Either she needed to get off on being my plaything

I slapped her face with his cock --> I slapped her face with my cock

your cori bank series is one I always return to. I'm sure I will be returning to this story many times as well. Love how giving and happy to please your female characters always are

dlsloandlsloanabout 2 months agoAuthor

Thank you! I apologize for the typos and thank you for your sharp editorial eyes and kind words. Much appreciated!

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My stories generally feature exhibitionism and/or non-violent non-consent such as blackmail. I appreciate all feedback, both positive and negative, as I'm always looking to improve my writing. I also welcome feedback and suggestions for story ideas at dlsloan31@gmail.com.