All Comments on 'The Classical Twins'

by ThoughtfulTom

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
poor english, ignorance runs rampant

Was it "like 4 times" or "4 times"?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Pt2?

Would love to see more character development maybe where andi ask cass two be a third in the relationship

paladin1954paladin1954about 5 years ago
Very good story.

I saw a few examples of the Brit coming out in your writing (ie. "cunny"), but for the most part you did a very good job. There were a few errors around the sex places where I think you might have gotten caught up with the moment, but again nothing to write the grammar police about. Good Story!

jtwheelsjtwheelsabout 5 years ago
Future reference

Full professor at a big university makes very good money

2 uncles -now deceased-worked at 2 different universities one in Illinois other Indiana

Both made very good salaries

Context few sentences way out of context

Enjoyed

horny2doithorny2doitabout 5 years ago

Yes, a very well written story and is very arousing !! Hopefully, more chapters will be written soon, as these 2 girls I am sure will thank each other when Daddy is not home plus. Daddy now can screw each one and who knows maybe they will all do each other in the future ?? In any event, a very good story, very hot and so much potential left. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Hmmm...

Yes, good story, well written, etc, as others have noted, however curiously non-erotic. The erotic portions have a mechanical, almost textbook feel to them.

Omart57Omart57over 4 years ago
Wow that was

Beautiful!!! So good, so arousing and so sexy! Five stars!

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