by ThoughtfulTom
Would love to see more character development maybe where andi ask cass two be a third in the relationship
I saw a few examples of the Brit coming out in your writing (ie. "cunny"), but for the most part you did a very good job. There were a few errors around the sex places where I think you might have gotten caught up with the moment, but again nothing to write the grammar police about. Good Story!
Full professor at a big university makes very good money
2 uncles -now deceased-worked at 2 different universities one in Illinois other Indiana
Both made very good salaries
Context few sentences way out of context
Enjoyed
Yes, a very well written story and is very arousing !! Hopefully, more chapters will be written soon, as these 2 girls I am sure will thank each other when Daddy is not home plus. Daddy now can screw each one and who knows maybe they will all do each other in the future ?? In any event, a very good story, very hot and so much potential left. Thank you.
Yes, good story, well written, etc, as others have noted, however curiously non-erotic. The erotic portions have a mechanical, almost textbook feel to them.