All Comments on 'The Clean, Clean Arse of Home'

Your writing does draw one to be able to visualize what is happening. This is the kind of writing, in my mind, that is enjoyable. Keep up the great story telling.

It deserves to be continued, it's been really good so far!

Know this story is a few years old but just came across it and enjoyed it even though it's just a straight sibling stroke story. However, it's well written and could do with another chapter. The characters, Sharon and Chris, come alive and they and the story have some mileage in them.

Who was jill and peter mentioned in the opening paragraph with mom and dad