All Comments on 'The Club Ch. 01'

I have a good mind to sing Waltzing Maltilda,you are a great author.Sod the yanks.Good on you sport,I have noticed that some of the best stories recently come from you ANZACS.

Now anonymous in ENGLAND, I take OFFENSE to that remark about us YANKS.. What the hell did I say or do to piss you off, I haven't even said anything till NOW?? BUT JUST SO YOU KNOW I too (also) like the authors writings and have read everyone of them....

Also I noticed that you don't even have it in you to sign your name, you opt to let the site sign you as (ANONYMOUS), damn brit grow some balls..... Hey Tarkas3, as you say, spot on, very good story, I'm waiting for more......

Paul

Hey, Hammer. I'm Roland the Brave. So now I'm exactly as anonymous as you, right? Oh, wait. I'm now HammerTheMagnificent. That makes me even less anonymous than you, doesn't it. No. Wait a minute! I'm actually Paul. There! Now you can't claim I won't sign my name, or any of my other name thingies. By the way, the "writer" of this "story" demonstrates so little skill at the craft of writing (and it was obvious from the first two paragraphs) that I didn't even bother reading the rest of the story before awarding it a zero. Signed, Paul. (I'm really Roland, but I'm trying to get "Paul" to confess his complaint was foolish. LOL )

I'm simply enjoying the concept of The Club. Look, if The Clan is a great idea--boys sticking their hard young cock up the same cunt they came out of--and it certainly is, then what could be wrong with a father shoving his fat veiny daddy-dick up his baby girl's cute little coochie? In The Clan we have boys blowing their hot young balls right up their own mother's mature welcoming twat. The Club shows us fathers unloading their heavy daddy-balls up their own daughter's sweet welcoming slit. Both are totally appropriate, just the way it should be in loving families. Family semen belongs in family cunts.