All Comments on 'The Coffee Shop Ch. 03'

I love this story. There is a depth to it that very few of the stories on Lit have. Eagerly anticipating chapter 4

This story keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for more!

"Caleb is a delicate character to work with, as you'll soon find out." From Ch. 03 Author's Note

Peyton isn't a model of simplicity either. I have no idea of where you are taking us, but you've hooked me into what I am confident will be an interesting ride. Thanks.

What is there to add to "intense"?

you write really well. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing!

Another great chapter. I enjoy the pace of this story and appreciate that you are taking your time to delve into the characters and show us who they really are. I don't mind waiting patiently for the sex, because I know that as of right now this story is in a different place, and there isn't any way either of them would necessarily be able to handle a physical relationship (especially not Caleb) judging from all of the issues which surround them. As of right now I am more into the characters and very interested in seeing how they will change and grow. I can already tell this will be a beautifully complex love story. You are doing an amazing job with this story and I excitedly await the continuation of it.

this is some excellent writing on a very difficult story. Please continue.

*****

believe it or not i understand why you chose this angle for calebs story, it is some what refreshing for someone to take this way of thinking for a romance story. but anyway keep up the brilliant writing look forward to reading more from you in the not to distant future.

I love the path this story is taking and the intensity of male character. the realness of story make a person wanting for a happy ending but without pain there is no joy

Looking forward to more of the story,,

5+++++

i'm lovin' this story, don't let anyone else tell you other wise.

i can't wait to read on.

:~)

Laethe

Borderline for helping and being kind of helpless on your own ..... Yes officials are the best address but there are soooooo many with such mistreated childlife ..... So yes you may show a way to be to offer help and the decision should left over to the other being ..... But great story and great writing

My dad broke my front too teeth and three times whipped me so badly that I could not change clothes in PE. Now I’m a board certified juvenile law attorney and I see horrible abuse all the time - like 12 year old girls getting raped by their own dads or parents feeding toddlers meth. It’s perfectly lovely when a court asks you to represent a fifteen year old mom blowing marijuana smoke into her baby’s face while baby-daddy records on cell phone so they can share the fun with their friends. It’s a fricked up world and the sad part is that more often than not, the abusers were, in their own childhoods, abused just as badly, if not worse. Great story so far (and I represented a 16 year old boy who shot his own dad - I walked him. One of the more interesting pictures was my client, as a four year old boy, posing on a motorcycle with his deceased father’s girlfriend. Go figure. This isn’t my story but this resonates with me - big time).