by marla_gillis
Although your description of the sexual acts in the story was great, the story itself was quite plain and hard to read through. You didn't seem to really need all the characters. I would also have liked to get a better description of what the horses + mistress were wearing/looked like.
What was the hair colour? The skin tone? Eye colour? Describe their tack, etc.
I'd like to read more about the pony interactions like Stallion and Colt, with each other and other slaves. Great fantasy!
Good story but I'm a little confused..were the horses actually horses or people?