All Comments on 'The Coming of Age Ceremony'

but I prefer a happily-ever-after. And this was sad.

Well written I felt so in tune with the characters and cried lots near the end.

does she go back? Is she with child? will there be another part to this

Great storyline - well written. (Only error was early as she experienced periods described a "a few weeks" [at least 2 of them] - but she was only there a month). As others have said - happy endings are better! Please have a Part 2!!

continue this story and finish it. Such a wonderful little microcosm of a world - so clearly described - and a promise to see each other again... Don't let it end here.

A definite 5 stars! I loved it!!! I vote with everyone else: please continue and finish this story!

This is definitely a wonderful tale, and is well balanced in both erotic and emotional natures. 5 stars.

A great storyline well thought out. enjoyed all of it Hope you don't keep us waiting too long for the sequal.

A definite 5 Stars

I felt like I was reading an actual story. This was well thought out and I think that theta needs to travel a bit. I would love to see how he interacts with the modern world.

write another chapter please, it was soooo good!