All Comments on 'The Complete Submission Ch. 04'

Really enjoyed the story, I'm a very dominant male and enjoy domination and bondage. I particularly enjoyed the younger girl dominating an older dominant woman, because of this I read all your stories, gay male doesn't really do it for me but enjoyed the others. The only thing I'd like to see more of is bondage but not if it takes away from the story

Once again another hot read, loved the domination going on, the reveal on who Nadine's mom was rocked can't wait see what happens next.

way too exagerated, i prefer your other publications, much more realistc

On the subject of the discovery of the mom's rival, I think it would be better to see her actually ruined publicly and then made into a slave.

carla has a pussy that manufactures cocain maybe??????

favorite chapters you have written. Again, I know it is not real, but respecting someone's orientation is a real biggie with me.

It is sexy and gets arousal while reading this again and again.

Although each chapter is relatively short (for you). You pack so much into them, that you put most other writers to shame.

549. Too many characters- hard to keep them all in mind.