All Comments on 'The Concert'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Haha, brilliant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Damn hot

Loved it! Hope that there’s a follow up

o2byoungo2byoungover 5 years ago
Wearing kilts can have an advantage

Did that occur in Scotland or Ireland? I was a fun story, but likely 100% fiction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
So dumb

Completely killed it for me when basically everyone caught them and was like oh... okay.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Amazing

We need more! Like fuck, I wanna see mike join in!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot

To bad this isn't a true story but very hot

wawferwawferabout 5 years ago
Sorry!!

I tried to tap5 stars and accidentally tapped 3!!! Im so sorry. This is a good story.

WinterDragonWinterDragonalmost 5 years ago
👏🏻

Thank you. I laughed. A lot. Gotta love a man in a kilt.... and the people who love them.

JamesLoganHowlettJamesLoganHowlettover 3 years ago
Great!

Loved it! Please continue the story with what happened when they all got home

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Needs.

Sequels!

BoytitsBoytitsabout 3 years ago

Would have been a great place to have an orgy like it thanks for writing!

NBandQueerRenNBandQueerRenabout 3 years ago

I know the twins said they didn't really have interest in other guys, but it would be fun to see them sit on the guards laps to distract them

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

10/10 part two pleeeeeeeease

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

hot af. needs a part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The story is just so fucking hot and exciting. From start to finish. And make me want to watch and cheer them on. Have known some brother Inso would love to have done.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

This story was awesome, more comedic than arousing, but it was definitely a fun read lol

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I'm just a guy with a wild imagination who likes to put it on vitual paper. After channeling ideas to fan fiction for some time, I've turned my hand to original stories and characters. Though I try to keep things as realistic and believable as possible, I do believe fiction, n...