All Comments on 'The Cover Is Not the Story Ch. 02'

I would just like to say that this was an amazing and wonderful continuation of the 1st chapter. Although it was truely sad the reaction of Carol, the rest of the story was strong with the Love of the family. I was pleasantly and wonderfully surprized with the revelation of Abe's and Crystal's past. I questioned in my mind how you could expand on the first chapter but you did an amazing job. Thank You

I absolutely love this setting and these characters. My only question was how did Carrol get back to their apartment before them to leave the "package"?

I have enjoyed both chapters - although I must admit it took a while to get into chapter 1. Please give us more - I don't think it's over yet.

I'm really enjoying this. Keep it coming.

PS my comment on the first chapter was a touch narcissistic, and should have included the information that some of the ideas in my story came from "Leaving the Navy" a much earlier scorpio44 story.

Keep them coming can't wait for the next chapter

this is a great story please continue it

What better way to explore a philosophy of love than through the artifice of a great story line. The characters are real and the plot more than plausible. I love this story and I love this writer ... and his family. Namasté.

to semi quote dickens oliver twist please more cant wait

please please please

Great story. More please!!

Your stories leave me wanting more and wanting in.

I am abusing work time way too much but - umm - well -

We'll see lol -

Great stuff -

BUT you still need a context editor to fix the my when you mean me or may - not distracting enough to push me away but it will prevent some from going deep enough to get the important messages -

I read all of Robert Heinlein's books before I was 18. I love the way you tied him into this series....I always wanted to live in one of his extended families. Excellent work!

It was really very satisfying to have her being thoroughly loved. Thank you.

Just wondering are you going to continue this series or it started in the rain or both or neither id love to know?

Loved the story!! larry kansas

I was waiting for Sandy to be the fulcrum for male/Sandy/female! But liked it a lot anyway. Lynn

Very different, very good. Thank you for another excellent read.

It seems that there was a little more "reality" than usual BUT, As Always, it was enlightening / educational and provided me with a different perspective, about life and people.

All Positive !

THANK YOU !