All Comments on 'The Crack of Dawn'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Part 2 is inevitable.

I think Ronni should plot a threesome with Dawn and Gina. Or maybe even Dawn plotting to make it happen. I like the party theme too. Sometimes they pick up a boy toy and sometimes they pick up a girl toy or two to seduce. When it's a guy use a motel and when it's a girl bring her home. That way when it's a girl you have access to toys from a night stand or closet. Toys like strap ons and vibrators or leather bindings. Ronni seems the most adventurous of the two so maybe they go to her house with a girl.

FalcoFoxburrFalcoFoxburralmost 8 years ago

I actually diagree with the comment about the incest cliches. I thought the third bomb dropped on Dawn was brilliant. It was a short but sweet encounter between the kids and I look forward to reading where Dawn will go next.

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