All Comments on 'The Craving'

Wondering why you re-posted this.

Editing?

One of my favorites.

I enjoyed this very much. This was a good hard read for me! lol

Yep, I loved the writing style and the story. Good stuff.

I am reposting some of my favorites that I have edited for typos and stuff. I originally took all my stories down and intended to leave, but I had some very nice response to that action that convinced me I should leave some of my mark here.

this was A1 first class reading. I wanna read the continued story. Plz tell me where to get more of your stories.

Thanks for the story one of the best out there .Another ten or twelve chapters ought to be enough But maybe not.

Awesome read!! Long stories like this are great to read as long as the sex is hot throughout the story. The Craving delivers. Looking forward to the continuation.

what about the dad? Would love to see the whole family get involved. Great story you have here.

Sarah just has to become involved - and soon - keep up the good work - xxxx

This is the longest story I've read on here so far but definately worth it,,,an amazing read, sexual and erotic,,it covers all the bases and stands out well.

The author is now firmly in my favs; so I can follow any further offerings.

This was just fucking awesome mate. Eagerly waiting for the next installment. I just have one request, though. Please, please whatever else you do, just don't get the Dad or any other guys involved. That shit ain't fun and just ruins the whole scene, eh?

Thanks for the awesome tale. Cheers.

This was hot reading keep it up hope to see more of your stories posted soon.

Why the reposting today as a new story? When is the next chapter going to be posted?

Sorry for the second repost, someone flagged the story as inappropriate so I had to add the disclaimer at the beginning.

I really liked the ghost dad part and wished that played a larger part in story. This was very good but in a mainstream way. Incest with erotic horror angle would have made this unforgettable.

am still throbbing from this story and anxiously awaiting the Sarah involvement saga! please hurry and post the next installment.

I'm not a big fan of the long story - 5 pages is usually my limit - but this was excellent. The sex scenes could've gone a little longer, been a bit more descriptive, with extended dialogue but that's just me... 10 pages would turn into 20.

Faved you as _ and have faved you as you are now. Glad your back, keep up the good work. The JAB art work is great, another Fav.

lol wut???? How is a 7 inch dick "modest"???? unless Mom is a size queen???? 7 inches is considered to be way above the average of 5 to 5 and a half buddy. Mine keeps the ladies in my fam happy. ; )

Great story. Perfect build up to some really hot sex. Can't wait for the next segments

It's a great story! I read it until I wanked and came, then had to return to it the next time. When I reached the end, I'd come 4 times! Thanks for giving me so many orgasms. It's filthy and put lots of extra thoughts into my head. I'd love to read more!

Would love to hear of more teasing ls clevage lingerie etc. But omg what a sensational story ty

I hope there’s more, please.

As soon as Breanna joined in I started losing interest. Then others followed.

Didn't finish. Thanks.

Like another, the sex scenes would be better(more erotic) with more description, play by play, lick by lick. But that would have made a few more pages. Or break it into more chapters. Also like another reader, would be good to have dad involved. Matt could use the help.

Poor clueless husband, what a bitch the wife and mother is. To fuckup her own kids to satisfy her lust

What a cunt!!!!

Honestly the constant reaffirming of “I’m not a lesbian but...” or “not that I’m attracted to her sexually..” was downright exhausting and definitely elicited plenty of eye rolls, like it’s okay to just let people in the stories be bi, or curious or whatever like you don’t have to continuously remind people of their preferences

One of the best which I have read. Thank you so much for writing this one

I'm slightly surprised they allowed this on the site, considering the back story involving the main character and her father getting together when she was much younger, but I’ve always thought Literotica's rules about underage sex to be a bit silly, so I’m not complaining. A very good story, although I’m not sure you needed to introduce more family members.

Good to see you reposting your stories again. I'm very glad.

Can you expand upon and post Family Evening?

Ciao

Loved it!!!

Well i was sure i had read this before , but as i had not commented on it i guess i did not read it , but now i am annoyed at myself for not finding this gem earlier lol .

What a read you have given us , perfectly written right amount of love , sex and out and out fucking , and this is before i have read the other parts , so i am off now to do just that .

Thankyou for the time and effort you have put into this and other stories you have written for us your readers .

Very well done

Well wrote and what a life ,,, it was as life should be ,,,,

And...there goes "Wargamer' again, complaining about the 'poor husband's while cursing the wife for ruining it all for everybody...INCLUDING THE READERS HERE!! You knew what was going on, why continue reading, just to make the scrappy negative comments??!! "SOME PEOPLE...!!"

I have enjoyed the stories, the (10) page chapters/parts; each page is almost a story unto itself! Now, I am ready for the "Finale"...

Five**5**Stars...I like the (50) star score another reader gave...(5) for each page...that was WWWAAAYYYHHY generous!!

Gotta say after rereading this entry in the cravings series (I've loved the latest entries!) the repeated references to how "modest" Tom's dick is, and the repeated inferences/veiled implications that he's sexually inadequate in comparison to his son and (deceased) FIL, partly because of that "modest" (though above average by over an inch, and as a woman I can tell you that inch is nice, but thicker is even better!) 7 inch dick... Those things cause some awkwardness when it comes to adding "modestly equipped daddy" to the family fuckfest. Actually it makes me wonder why Sarah would possibly call out "daddy!" while fucking Tom, since clearly he only manages to very occasionally please his own wife, and Sarah has already experienced the "much bigger" equipment and sexual prowess that Matt brings to the party.

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TL:Dr:

It's pretty obvious that this entry in the cravings series was written as a standalone. Stuff that denigrates the husband and father's sexual prowess and equipment makes some elements of the later entries seem awkward and difficult to credit. A bit of editing might not be uncalled for, if you're so inclined. Would blend it all together better.

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PS: Also it's a bit unusual (genetically speaking) for a son to have an endowment that so massively eclipses that of his father. Obviously that was completely irrelevant to this story originally, because it was meant to be hot, not realistic. But it's an additional point to consider on the subject of modifying Tom's endowment in an edit.

Love your work!

Note, I'm including "the finale" in "this entry" fwiw. Was rereading the story again (so damn hot!) and saw my comment and felt I had to clarify. Obviously Matt fucks Sarah in the finale, not this chapter. While I'm on that subject, might consider editing that title too. Or clarifying that the later entries take place in a parallel universe or something where things are slightly different.

I lost count of how many times I came to this. Fucking awesome. I’m still playing with myself and about to cum again

Loved it!! A great five star erotic tale ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️