All Comments on 'The Cure Ch. 08'

All in All a great story 5 stars all the way.

sweet, endearing, funny, sexy are but a few ways to describe this one. I enjoyed it from the start and was never disappointed. I hope we have not seen the last of G and Gail, but even if we don't read about any more of their adventures it's been fun. Thanks for Sharing!

Very nice HEA. Good spot to leave this one and start a new story IMO. Well done, doesn't need tweaking or improving in any way.

A very good story. Sexy and romantic. I would love to read of more adventures of G and Gail.

Wow, spectacularly written!! Real feelings, real doubts, real love, and serious sexy time. My only critique, is that when you swap from G's perspective to Gail's, during the scene with Jen at the house, there should be some sort of visual break. Even if it is just a line of dashes across the page, but something to indicate a change of perspective like that. Beyond that, perfect pacing, all the feels. Looking forward to reading about their wishes!