The Currency of Time Ch. 01

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"You'll be the first to know."

I walked out of the hospital accompanied by an honor guard of three security men. I looked back one time.

Right now all the odds were against me, but I had one advantage. I knew she was lying, which meant this whole amnesia story was a crock. I wished I didn't know. I wished I could believe she had really lost her memory and MY Deirdre might someday return to me.

But now I knew that was only a hopeless dream. I was going to have to learn to live my life alone.

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AnonymousAnonymous21 days ago

“I never once – as far as I can remember- worried about the men whose women I fucked”

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I got that far, and I’m out. Anything horrible that happens to that character is justice.

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ZK

Ridiculous69Ridiculous693 months ago

Just doesn’t flow very well half way through the story. The end is bizarre and makes no sense. They could fire him but they couldn’t have cancelled his personal credit cards or kept him away from using his own money Seems way too farfetched and unbelievable at the end.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Well, this started well, but the whole totally unrealistic and illegal way of trying to keep him away from her broke my suspension of disbelief and ruined it for me. Otherwise I'd have given it five stars for the characters alone.

tsgtcapttsgtcapt7 months ago

Well, foreshadowing... yhanks.

RimmerdalRimmerdal12 months ago

A fail. He knew her past and did not keep eyes on her.

More holes than a pasta collander.

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